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- March 5, 2009 at 08:00 #213502
Jack
your joke back there
is good
it is real
it touches
but you don’t
you are
and have been a
constant dissapointmentI am halfway through a
bottle of whisky
it’s called Aberlour
which sounds
like a roxy music lyricThe whisky is ten years old
you are but five
but …
the whisky goes down smooth
Jack
erm
its well proofed
while you
you
promised to proof
but
never did.Why couldn’t you come good Jack ?
with your pointless identty ?
A little bit of nervousness ?
A little bit of insecurity ?
A little bit of evasion ?Sleep well Jack
I intend to take
you
to heaven
and back.I believe
I am aware of
which site you are
lurking in
The fact is
You have disapointed
You have broken
your promiseYou owe me
THIS IS NOT GETTING PERSONAL
but the hounds
are getting hungry
and you may welll
suggest I am deranged
as you have done privately
but let me tell you
those herrings you fed me
are possibly
about to spawnIt is 0240
time for some kip.The whisky bottle
may well have unleashed Jack
but really in my heart
he is but a trifle
a murmur
and of
no
or little
consequence.All that really matters
is the continuation
of interesting things
and the pursuit
of the Y
of all things
and if not finding it
and if not successful
then
the simple pleasure of
existing.NAFF
its almost 3amNovember 30, 2009 at 12:06 #261298I have dredged this idiosyncrasy
up from the deep
purely on account of Tor Mentor
– in his honour.Clone meat is hard
let the rain
not wash him out
but expose his hidden selfMy enquiry into clone
just is lengthwise
less year on year
because of the numbers,
the anonymity, and
the increasing cleverness of clones.
I correct myself
– Salty Jack finished me.I do have Tor Mentor
it took me five hours
to discover it
and I am pleased with my success
purely on the mental excercisesStrange thing is I intend to
keep Tor hidden, but will point
out his mistakes. He seems
freer in his new shape
and I would ask others
to respect this clone’s disguise.I am a fraud on the racing section
in fact I regret coming back.
My current situation is very hard
I am hemmed in
and writing offers no escape for me,
and I grabbed at the elusion it offered
like a drowning man a straw.I will post up once
or twice more on Tor
then dissapear
back to the uglinesss
of my holeNovember 30, 2009 at 13:46 #261312deleted
November 30, 2009 at 16:23 #261337Barking possibly
but the wrong tree no.Festive greetings to you too Tor
and may I extend your lit-up tree
to others like me trapped inside
the edge of reezan.Now let us remove some of your clothing

Hound Tor – your favourite place
a granite overcrop of rock
juggled around and fashioned by the weather
into the dauntingly macabre shape
of dogs heads
peering out into the darkness,
a darkness devilishly shrouded
by unforgiving mist,
where Conan Doyle sat barely seen,
stroking his sherlocks
planning and penning
his longly salivated comeback
atop an oversized luminous dog." Watson brolly up down there
muscle movement tells me
the dog is raising its leg…"November 30, 2009 at 21:16 #261425deleted
December 1, 2009 at 08:52 #261470You are certainly brightening this
place up Tor h’mmm.on and upward..
Hounds Tor famously hosted
Doctor Who’s Sontaran experiment in 1975.
Who was the doctor involved…?
Tom Baker
Who was old Ian’s favourite doctor ?
Tom Baker.No but you are not Ian Tor
despite my often comparing Ian
to Ricky Gerbilface."Erm Holmes too late for the brolly
and I am sorry to say I just got your
sandwich out of the case."" But Watson the sandwiches are identical
surely the deduction is you got yours out "" No Holmes, you are forgetting I am a gentleman. "
December 1, 2009 at 15:11 #261525Gamble, methinks you are obsessing and wasting what little time you have left in this meadow by trying to flush out Avis. Best to let the sleeping dog lie, through his teeth. Who really cares where Diane spews his egotistical bile these days? Moi? Jamais!
"Anyway, it’s looking like a beautiful day"
December 1, 2009 at 19:20 #261581In all the places that I’ve ‘seen’ Mr.Davies, I’ve not seen him spew any bile.
I have seen him win a lot of arguements, as he’s a clever man who can tie people up in knots with his sharp mind and long scarf.Maybe this is what some don’t like

(I’ve always found him pompous, ill-informed, a little naive and, most overwhelmingly of all, a little one dimensional in his thinking, incapable of complex thinking that is. All in my opinion of course – editor)[/color:mfbj05w5]
December 1, 2009 at 22:39 #261628Was a beautiful day alright
but yes as far as obsessing hoof
my whole internet experience
could be described as such.
It certainly is a concern – but it
takes my mind of the fact I’m
trapped in this strange hall
of quickly distorting mirrors
and similarly trapped in my bog life
with the bathroom mirror and the one in
the hall both extreme enemies
that point horrible fingers.
Ten whole years of writing random
can turn you cuckoo.
I hate those two mirrorsI’ve just been out for some krone
and in a sense that obliterates
the harshness of reality, but this
boxey life we all lead must have some
consolation even if it smells of self destruct.As for Avis
he has a far more normal life than me
and certainly I am not a hunting for him.Tor is embedded in the dangerous moor
an excitingly dexterous poacher
with bright feathers in his cap
and long green leotards.
No gunshot just a hard rain
to flush him outDecember 1, 2009 at 23:28 #261653As for the clone Salty Jack
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December 2, 2009 at 00:06 #261683I removed the post above
or below
it was far too indulgent.I have one krone left
and I suppose it’s high time
to start detailing some of
Tor’s elemental mistakes.
Yes I shook a leg for five hours
to nail you, but as I promised
gently gently"draw those curtains Eva
and stop watching that squall
it might take a fancy to yer"December 2, 2009 at 00:08 #261684krone or crone?
Hope you enjoy your work.I know I do
December 2, 2009 at 00:12 #261686Krone or crone
well one usually
follows the other
Likewise Tor
I am an admirer
of your hit and thrust
front page bravadoDecember 2, 2009 at 00:20 #261687Just in case someone
exposes you
and gets to you before I do
I have left a code
in one of my postings
not easy !
Please don’t try.I have to admit
at first I thought you
were Friggo
that was in the first hour
December 2, 2009 at 00:25 #261688It’s like The Golden Hare

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December 2, 2009 at 00:35 #261690The reason I gave you green leotards
well…there is a certain greeness
a freshness, a naievety about you
but not a bad thing at all
in this puffed up, trumped up,
contrived double dealing world
where people are numbers
and the numbers will get them
so they stare in a mirror
with their kit half on
and try to forget their age
and all they see is
a masqueradeDecember 2, 2009 at 00:48 #261692I dont have no crone tonight
to folow my krone tonight
I am strangely left alone
to fight the only thing
I’m good at
a clone
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